Peer Review Comments

*For Nawara: 

1. Your rough draft is very good so far. I am very impressed with how you connected children with social orders today to Enders Game; it is a great analysis. What you said is very true. The quotes that you used were also very relevant and useful to your topic.
2. One question I have is about the camp mentioned at the second to last paragraph. Do you mean the training school or the planet he was sent to?
3. Maybe you could also talk about how the training school environment Ender was in affected him.
*For Amber C:

1. You tell the story of the countless times that they meet, and the problems that occur throughout each reincarnation, but there is not DEEPER MEANING(analysis) to it stated. It would be much more interesting if you told of the meaning of the green gem, etc. . Also, you need more concrete details to support what you say. 
2. It also seems like the different topics of the review need to be integrated together more smoothly. The paragraph transitions can be rough. 
3. Fix grammer mistakes. 
*For Amber G:

1. I really like your analysis of Talon. It really makes sense how you say his character was shaped by the life he lived on the streets, and how he really is an adult in a child's body.
2. I really the dialogue you used to convey his character. "Talon makes Church officials laugh with his childish suggestions, he makes Knights blush with his perverse comments, he makes nobles confused and he makes other thieves jealous. Talon has such a broad character that fits perfectly inside the small stature of a young thief." It really allows me to see him in the book.
3. Maybe somehow make a deeper analysis of the character....go into greater detail about how his character was shaped, connect that idea to something else, ect. lol. 
But overall good review.